"Like sand slipping through trembling fingers, she wanted to find something in him she could hold onto" I kno I keep saying this but I always love the way you start fics

I really like the prose in this piece too. It has a lot of feeling

“I think you should try being honest with me.” oooo so upfront

“You know, you actually look more handsome to me with honesty on your face.” OOOO SO UPFRONT. Also I loved how you described dazai's quick changing of emotion/demeanor right after this ("The rapid transition of his expression from astonishment to confusion to embarrassment ... There was a twinkle of amusement, of self-satisfaction in his dark eyes that only intensified her self-loathing...")

and the banter at the end was so good too ;;