The way you set this up is just *chefs kiss* like the suspense, the tension... bro... Also the villain's dialogue is so good. Sounds like a classic disposable bad guy
"The moment she came to terms with the identity of the figure she was staring at, she realized the calm and relieved feelings that’d stirred in her chest were regrettably premature." This line is soooo good, now shit's getting real. Honestly the whole description of Hei was just A+
Also I feel bad for him like, he saves you and you immediately start pleading for your life. Poor dude :( (it's kinda his fault tho)
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Date: 2020-07-26 02:08 am (UTC)"The moment she came to terms with the identity of the figure she was staring at, she realized the calm and relieved feelings that’d stirred in her chest were regrettably premature." This line is soooo good, now shit's getting real. Honestly the whole description of Hei was just A+
Also I feel bad for him like, he saves you and you immediately start pleading for your life. Poor dude :( (it's kinda his fault tho)